Gradesheet Criminology 3703, Toxic In/Justice, 2nd term 2024-25, MW, 2.30-3.50, BMH103
proposed marking scale for classmark (engagement exercises): Bonus points **   12/13=A-20   10/11=B18.5  8/9=B-17.5  6/7=C16  5/6=C-15  4=D14  <4=F10

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Assignments: All assignments are (in general) excuseable but not makeupable.
Q1 1.15. Are protests effective. If not, why. If so, how?
Q2  1.20. Why are such survivor statements important? (re Westray  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RPyaIAQzFvk
Q3 1.22. What is the likelihood of such an event happening again?
Q4. 1.29. What emotions are involved in moving forward (re Boat Harbour).
Q5. 2.03. How do you define an environmental crisis?
Q6. 2.05. How could the presentation be improved?
Q7. 2.10. Should Lois Gibbs be a climate hero?
Q8. 2.12. Why has the problem at Grassy Narrows persisted?
Q9. 2.19. Why is it important to speak up? With regard to the video on the danger of being silent.
Q10. 2.24. Does one have a moral responsibility to disobey unjust laws? wrt "The Crime: Compassion"
Q11. 2.26. Was the surveillance of the protestors warranted?
Q12. 3.19. What was the most important thing you heard/learned today during the presentation?
Q13. 3.24. Is the indigenous perspective of Winona Laduke part of the solution to colonial development?
** attendance at participations


Research Project:

Gulf2010 -- 3 people; 6 dspaced pages including titlepage, refspage, subtitles, and pictures; excellent summation of the event, and the reasons that led to the disaster; there might have been regulatory problems too; overall, good topic and treatment, the pictures really add to the presentation. A- 80% 16/20 Presentation: the video was too long, but the presentation could have started with that; good visuals, text on slides too small, and too many; took turns speaking, and there was a lot of information; could have had more on the reasons for the disaster; well organized and well-spoken, good focus on the animal aspect. overall, excellent work. A- 80% 20/25 project: 3 people, 10 pdf dspaced pages including titlepage and refspage, subtitles and pictures; lots of detail, and the issues are explained well; could use more pictures; overall, excellent work. A- 80% 24/30

Polley2014 -- 3 dspaced pages including titlepage, subtitles, no refspage; this was an incredible disaster, and as you say, could easily have been prevented; more specifics on the regulations and their (lack of) enforcement and fines would add to the analysis; good beginning to an important topic. B 75% 15/20 Presentation: described how tailings pond failed; brief description of facts, and too much text on slides, mostly read; well spoken and well organized, engaged with audience, and showed useful images and videos; good info on effect on indigenous people; academic but also easily understood; overall, excellent work. A- 80% 20/25  Project: 8 dspaced pages including titlepage and refspage, subtitles, no pictures; the overall coverage of the disaster could use more (visual) detail, eg. maps, charts; the writing is rough and could be rewritten to be smoother; overall, good topic, could use more detail and stylistic features. B+ 23/30 78% 

TeckCoal -- 3 dspaced pages including subtitles, picture, refspage; this is an important event, because it highlights the need for regulations and their enforcement; a bit short, but a good beginning. B- 70% 14/20 Presentation: calm, read confidently from slides, which were well designed; wordy, perhaps slides could be simplified; problems clearly defined; one video repetitive; indigenous targeting well highlighted; good information overall, ie. on selenium; overall, excellent work. A 82% 21/25 Project: Nine dspaced pages including two refspages, no subtitles or pictures; overall, a good essay on the mining company and its difficulties, and could be combined with the presentation, where there are subtitles, pictures, etc; overall, very comprehensive coverage of an important topic. A 85% 25/30

Nestle -- 4 dspaced pages including refspage, picture, no subtitles; the ability of such large corporations to effect the environment is incredible, and also probably speaks to the lack of regulations or enforcement?; overall, good topic, good beginning, could have more detail. B- 70% 14/20 Presentation: great topic, so under the radar; spoke from minimal note with a maximum of drama; knew the material, made eye contact, and spoke confidently; short video overall, excellent work. A+ 88% 22/25 project: 13 slides, including titleslide and refsslide; slides very informative, and backed up by minimal information in the notes section, which could be expanded more; overall, excellent work, should develop the essay component more. A- 24/30 80%

Sydney -- 2 people; 8 dspaced pages (!) including subtitles, and 4 refpages; this is an important topic for nova scotia, and could be compared to love canal, because of the 'domestic' contamination; using charts and pictures of the area will show very clearly the impact on neighbouring residential areas; overall, strong topic. B+ 78% 15.5/20 Presentation: short video about the cleanup focused mainly n the engineering; took turns talking with notes, almost too long; good use of concepts, eg. environmental racism; well organized and engaged with audience; addressed lack of accountability and long term effects; overall, excellent work. A 21/25 project: 2 people, 21 slides, with most of the information on the slides, which makes the essay component short (essay provided separately); however, the information included is good: history, pollution, remediation, enviro-racism, etc; A 25/30  83%

DakotaAccess -- 2 dspaced pages plus refspage (4 webrefs), and subtitles; this is perhaps the largest protested pipeline project in recent times; the use of intersectional theory, and of such concepts as environmental racism really strengthen the analysis, as would including videos or photos of protests; overall, excellent beginning. A- 80% 16/20 Presentation: slides with pictures, too much text perhaps; showed lots of conflict with natives, and discussed themes such as enviro-racism and intersectionalism; good use of images from the protests; overall, excellent work. A 84% 21/25 project: 14 slides, including titleslide and refsslide, minimal text in notes and max on slides, which makes for cluttered slides and a short essay; overall, good topic, and explained well, should develop the essay component more. B+ 78 23/30

Aberfan1966 -- 4 dspaced pages including titlepage, refspage, subtitles, and picture; short and to the point, the analysis points to corporate neglect, and perhaps ineffective legislation?; good beginning on an old (but important) case. B 75% 15/20 Presentation: timing was bit fast, and should have had an intro overview, and more eye contact with the audience; read from notes and showed abbreviated slides (without too much information), although they were kind of plain; there was good information on the role of the government; interesting theory on why event happened; video was a good touch of the survivor  overall, excellent work. A- 80% 20/25 project: the notes consist of 3 sspaced pages with subtitles, and could be put into the notes on the slides; overall, good work, the writing is a bit rough and could be smoother; could have more explicit development of the enviro-theme. B 22.5/30 75%

WolfCulls -- 4 dspaced pages, including titlepage, subtitles, picture, and refspage; animal rights are such an important part of environmental justice; and the fact that it was development which effected the caribou habitat in the first place which made them easier prey shows that humans were the problem; excellent beginning. A- 80% 16/20 Presentation: short 10 min video with good pictures and a minimum of text; the voice layover was easily understood, and discussed the reasons for the culls, etc.; extensive citing of numbers of wolves culled, and caribou saved; some mention of lack of public support; more development of the connection to toxic and the environment would strengthen the theme; overall, excellent work. A- 80% 20/25  Project: 10 slides made from stills of the presentation, no extra notes, which makes for a lack of essay content. B 22.5/30 75%

AnimalActivism -- 5 sspaced pages (!), including titepage, subtitles, and refspage; good summary of the issues, with some historical details; the limits on activism are certainly part of the problem and need to be exposed; filling in with some species-specific facts, eg. pig pens, or veal stalls would add detail. overall, excellent beginning. A 85% 17/20 Presentation:  overall, excellent work. Project: Ten dspaced pages including titlepage, refspage, subtitles, no pictures; the treatment of the topic of activism is comprehensive, especially when it combines with 'rights' and 'environmentalism'. Overall, could use some visuals, but otherwise excellent work. A 85% 25/30

Mi'kmaqFish -- 2 people; 5 dspaced pages, including titlepage, extensive refspage, and subtitles; very important topic, one that first came to much public attention after Marshall 1998 (?), and events at Burnt Church; good use of legal case references, could use some photos of conflict, eg. Saulnierville; overall, excellent beginning. A-8016/20 Presentation: short presentation with 2 min video, could be longer; short history of treaties, took turns, mostly read; and the connection to toxic/evironment could be clearer; the slides were well laid out, and the information was easy to understand; overall, excellent work. A- 80% 20/25  project: 15 slides, with the essay component in the notes; overall, excellent work, and should make more explicit how this is an environmental issue. A- 24/30 80%

Deforestation -- 2 people; 3 sspaced pages including subtitles, webrefs page, and a picture; this presents a very comprehensive picture of the problem and potential solutions; including what regulations exist and how they do/don't help would add to the analysis; overall, excellent beginning. A 85% 17/20 Presentation: a bit short on time, and number of slides; detailed on reasons for, and consequences of deforestaton; connection to toxic/environment could be stronger; videos, and the lorax fun; overall, excellent work. A- 80% 20/25 project: 2 people, 11 slides, with no notes, making for the lack of an essay component. B- 70% 21/30

AnimalCruelty -- 5 sspaced pages including titlepage, subtitles, and refspage; as noted, this is important, because of issues like farm animal welfare, enviro sustainability, and public health; there are a lot of facts cited, which could be referenced; the role of regulation is highlighted, as are humane issues; overall, excellent work. A 85% 17/20 Presentation: slides of good quality, with only key information; critical questions; 2 short (but intense) videos; overall, excellent work. A 84% 21/25 project: 11 dspaced pages with subitles, pictures, titlepage and 2 refspages; lots of technical information on the issues, plus suggestions for change read well. overall, excellent. A- 24/30 80%