"Let's talk"
It seems that lots of people had difficulties with the process.
The prompt said this: "When you've chosen one, add a Reply to it
which uses the subject line 'Let's talk' and, in the body of the
posting, say in a sentence (or two) why you think we should talk
about it. Do this before noon on Thursday." I thought that was
clear, but obviously it wasn't. Many people seem to have replied
without changing the subject line; others replied, but not to the
posting they wanted to discuss. I'll take a couple of minutes to
demonstrate how this should have worked (for some people this will
be unnecessary; bear with me). I may or may not use this exact
assignment again, but it's worth getting comfortable with the
forum in general, because we will be using it regularly.
There's another reason for spending some time on this, and it has
to do with how we think about written language (and assignments).
Writing in this situation -- posting on a forum -- depends on
thinking about how what you write is going to be read, and that
doesn't only mean whether it says what you intend: it also, and
probably first, means you have to make it accessible to your
reader. That's not a problem, usually, if you're sending an email
or text to one person, or tweeting; that's taken care of for you.
And of course with most writing for class, the question of who
reads it doesn't come up.
But in most every other situation, it's the first consideration
-- and most people simply don't think about it. The fact that
their posting may not be where it will be accessible or
understandable to a reader isn't thought about. because the
writer's thinking about what she's saying, but not about who she's
saying it to.
Even in writing emails, where the problem of whether the reader
will find the message is solved, it's common for writers to ignore
the subject line, or just accept the one that's already there
without thinking about it. So I regularly get emails, especially
from students, which don't have one. And since that's the first
thing I see, I often miss important questions, because I respond
first to the emails that I can see from the incoming list clearly
matter. Similarly, I get emails that say they're going to be about
one thing, but in fact are about something else entirely. This
matters to the reader, even if she's not conscious of it.
Imagining who the reader is and what she knows and expects is
important for other reasons. When I get an email from N which
begins "My name is N," I know that N hasn't thought about what her
reader will already know, and probably doesn't write or receive
much email. It's very much like getting a term paper which begins,
"This is my term paper. It is going to be about . . . " Not
imagining a reader has other, even more important, consequences:
having a reader means you have something to say. If what you're
doing is no more than writing a posting on a forum in order to
have written a posting on a forum, it's probably going to be the
case that you won't much have to say. We don't "mean" in a
vacuum; we're always meaning in relation to other people.
In class today
The prompt also said, "I'll choose some to discuss during class."
As it happens, I couldn't, in the time I had, sort out the
postings that didn't have the subject line or weren't in the right
place. So I've looked only at the ones that actually had the
correct subject line, and selected a few of those we might focus
on for a few minutes. I'll put them up on the screen. As far as
possible, I want to continue focusing on the article and the way
it works, rather than on what we think about the subject. That's
important, of course, but for the immediate purpose in this course
it's mainly important because it affects the way we read the
article.
For next time
As is sometimes the case, I want to wait to see where I think we
are before I decide what's the most useful thing to do next. There
will be an assignment for Tuesday; it will be up in a prompt this
evening. Again, watch for it; I'll email the class list when it's
there. It will be Prompt #13.
Also for next time: starting in on learning journals
It's time to begin the process of keeping learning journals. I've
created a prompt to explain how that
will work. We'll take some time at the end of class today to give
people a chance to read it, and I'll show you where the Moodle
blog we'll be using is and how to access it.