English 3336 Restoration and Eighteenth Century Poetry and Prose
November 2011
Feedback on feedback
In this course I have tried to shift the locus of learning to the
students, by creating situations in which people read each other's writing,
and write in the awareness that others are reading that writing. Has this
helped, or changed, your learning?
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I have had a very hard time with this component of the course. I don't
feel comfortable with other student's reading my work, and I worry about
my own credibility when it comes to responding to other's work. I would
prefer to have the professor give me feedback, at least in addition to
what the students have to say. Thus far, I don't feel that this has helped
my learning. [I've thought for some years about this, and my experience
has been that the only time my "feedback" helps is when people are writing
in situations where they actually have an audience and a purpose other
than to become "better writers." There are lots of reasons I have been
convinced of this, but two are particularly strong. One is that my comments
actually don't make any difference: I can tell people endlessly that "alot"
isn't one word, for instance, and nothing happens. If I could have a conversation
about each such error with each person who commits it, I might make a difference,
but of course that's not even close to possible. The second reason I believe
this is that when I used to make comments on term papers at the ends of
courses, people usually didn't read them. -- didn't even pick the papers
up. I was answering questions no one had asked. I think you learn by using
writing for real purposes. If you don't see that it's possible for you
to inform or illuminate or persuade someone else, you'll be writing empty
sentences, and my corrections won't have any effect. If you care about
whether your writing affects someone else, you are more likely to learn.
And here's my final reason: everybody else comments on papers. If you learn
from that, fine. But why should all your classes do the same thing? If
some people learn in other ways, why shouldn't they have a chance to learn
that way too? ]
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This has helped me with my learning, because I am doing the research and
picking what to read. I am remembering more because it is interesting to
me versus someone giving me what I need to learn and read.
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Yes, it has helped me learn. I'm much more aware of how different contexts
of learning require different styles of context, and various levels of
formality-- and writing for other students takes a lot of the pressure
writing for just one prof, often has. Also, there's a sense that we are
equals, rather than just blind followers of the Liberal Arts education
voice of God...
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I am paying for a formal education and I find this class to be very informal
and pourly structured. I really just wish we could read a book and discuss
it in class without having to read everyones research. I don't hold any
value to any of the facts I read while reading research done by others
because I don't trust that they haven't just made it up. [Since what
happens in 90% of the English classes I'm aware of is that people "read
a book and discuss it in class," it seems to me people have lots of chances
to learn whatever it is that they learn by doing that. I think there are
other things to learn about literature -- and they involve understanding
how literature is studied, written about, and becomes a discipline, and
how people who don't approach a text as a problem to be decoded in a class
do that. I'd also suggest that I find it troubling to think that the only
way someone can trust what someone else reports is to go see for herself.
Sure, sometimes people are wrong, but that's not a problem that's peculiar
to students; we evaluate what we see, and hold open the possibility that
we, or the other person, might be wrong.]
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This part has helped and changed my learning, at the begining I was very
nervous because I am not a strong writter. Now I am very comfortable with
my other classmates and know who's work to read during certian circumstances.
I enjoy not having to focus on proper formating and language due to the
fact that I am completely drawn to valuable information instead of grammer
issues. [I'd like to reiterate that there is a time to focus
on grammar and spelling, etc. -- but it's the last thing a writer
should do, not the first.]
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Yes it has. I feel that I engage more in the topic when I write about it
myself, knowing that other students are going to read it and when reading
other's work.
2. I have tried to create situations in which student discussion --
via rounds, and in small groups, for example -- promotes learning. Has
there been significantly more discussion than in most of your other classes,
or not? Did you find the discussion promoted your own learning?
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I have never been a fan of getting together in a group of random people
and discussing because I find it usually doesn't last as long as the teacher
expects. I don't mind the rounds but I am not too sure about the small
groups, my group ended up doing well in the last assignment I find but
many others didnt. If there were to be more group assignments I think it
should be an option to pick your own members. [There are arguments on
both sides of this. The arguments for it are much stronger when the groups
last longer, but I have to say I'm skeptical even then. I'm always a bit
worried about citing "the real world," but most working groups aren't formed
because people like each other.]
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I do enjoy the rounds just because it encourages everyone to participate,
but I find also that many students feel uncomfortable when they are put
on the spot, and I have noticed in general that there is no more or less
conversation than in other classes.
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The discussions were helpful, but it gets repetitive because we have all
already discussed everything via moodle. Going to class seems trivial because
we know we aren't going to do anything we can't find on moodle. [Does
this suggest anything about how we might structure discussions to avoid
repetition?]
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I find there is so much more discussion in this class and I find this has
kept me on top of my work more. I am so engaged in this class while in
my other classes I struggle to go because I don't have any work to keep
on top of every week for class.
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I find that the rounds are not helpful to my learning but small groups
are. Small groups we are able to read each other's work and talk about
our learning.
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Yes there has been significantly more communication. My other classes are
lecture-based, and the only channel of communication students have are
in direct questions with the prof-- and hardly ever any substantial group
work, which tends to increase my learning. [I find the variance here
-- much more discussion, not much more -- fascinating. I suppose one explanation
is that people are writing out of different contexts.]
3. A focus of this course has been to give students opportunities to
make informed choices about their own reading, and thus to become more
used to making such choices. Do you think this has happened, and do you
think it has helped your learning about the writing of this period and
its contexts?
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No. It just makes me frustrated while trying to make a choice. [I wish
you could have been clearer about what the frustration is. Is it, I wonder,
about making "the right" choices?]
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We have had the opportunity to make informed choices about what to read,
and it has kept me more engaged than having to read mandatory text books,
or chapters chosen by the profs in my other classes. It has in various
aspects helped me learn about the kinds of things people wrote in the 18th
century, and I have gained more context-- I'm still in the process of understanding
what those texts mean in our modern context, though.
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I like getting to choose what I am going to read. Having the opportunity
to choose where I want to do my research for the week is helpful. The reason,
is because sometimes I go home for the weekend and cannot access the library
and other times I would like to be in the library. I think this has helped
with my learning about the writing of the 18th century and its contexts
because I remember practically everything I have learnt so far in this
class still. In other classes it merely goes in one ear and out the other.
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When it comes to picking out our own source of information at the library
it has seemed to work out well for me so far. It is sort of a stressful
thought to not know your upcoming assignments and readings due to clashes
of other courses and due date but when it comes to learning, yes this has
helped my knowledge on the 18th century.
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I appreciate having my own choice, but I can never be sure if I am making
the right choices about whom or what to read.
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It would be more helpful if there was a list given to us of non- fiction
writers from the period, rather than having us randomly picking ones we
think may be important to research and study. [I could do this, but
part of what I'm hoping people will learn about literary study is that
those lists are made up by folks with agendas, not laid down like the list
of elements in a table. Understanding how a field of study is constituted
seems to me one of the important things I can help people learn.]
4. Would you say that the workload in this course is heavier or lighter
than average? Does the structure of having regular assignments and class
discussions about them help you to stay engaged?
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I think it is a bit heavier. It is enjoyable, but I have work for this
class every week on top of my learning journal. Then there is the midterm
and exams (which are learning reflections). I do not mind the work load
at all, however. It is a good amount to keep the learning flowing. I guess
it is like the work load of other classes, but we teach ourselves instead
of the professor teaching us. I love the learning journal by the way, because
it keeps me on top of everything I have learnt, reflecting back on the
weeks work is something I like. [I'm happy to hear this; it doesn't
work this way for everybody, so it's nice to know it does for some.]
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I think the workload is a bit heavier in the sense that there is more work
to do than the typical "write two term papers," but it does make the process
of learning much more immediate, because every little task builds onto
the next, and you can't just coast through the course on autopilot and
then cramm in the last two weeks. I'm appreciative of the structure of
this class, because it keeps me focused, and learning-oriented.
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I have a hard time completing the assignments, I find that there are too
many of them, and I especially dislike the fact that the bulk of the workload
falls on the weekend. Many students work all weekend, or use it to have
some time to take care of their house work, etc, and I find that there
is too much work for this class that all has to be done on Sundays. [I'll
think about this. If the work needs to be done for the next class, it seems
to me to make an assignment on Wednesday, leaving five days, is better
than on Monday, leaving two -- even accepting that weekends are part of
it.]
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It's heavier. The fact that we have 3-4 weekly assignments for one class
that have no other value than the fact that we do them is stressful. Discussions
are engaging but moodle is not. ["No other value than the fact that
we do them" troubles me. What value should they have? Would a grade on
them be "a value"?]
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I am a fan of weekly assignments due to having a course similar with Dr.Mckim,
I find it helps me stay engaged and on top of things in the class. This
course's workload is much greater and less time periods to do them, we
have a new assignment every Monday and Wednesday and a journal for Sunday
night. I find that sometimes you should focus on giving us a break maybe
a couple weekends and only assigning something on mondays due the following
monday especially with final projects coming up!
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The workload for this class is heavier than all my other courses. Yes the
structure of the regular assignments helps me stay engaged, but sometimes
it's too much mostly on the weekends. The workload seems to take up much
of my weekend, giving me little time to do work for other classes. [I
try to structure assignments by suggesting how much time you should devote
to them (most assignments, it seems to me, are open-ended, and could take
weeks). Obviously this isn't working for many people. I'll keep thinking
about this.]
5. I've tried to create a course that helps people take responsibility
for their own learning, and for assessing for themselves the quality of
their own work. Has this worked? Has it helped your learning in general?
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Yes, I have learned a lot because I am learning at my own pace and putting
much thought and learning into the reports.
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Yes, I find this has helped a lot. I get nervous posting for students in
my class because they recognize me and talk to me in the group discussions.
If it was just work being handed in to the professor, I would just keep
myself believing that the professor does not recognize me because normally
I don't talk to the professors anyway. It has helped my learning in general
because I have to really think about what I am writing and make sure it
makes sense, and is easy to read for every student. [I'm interested
to read this response, because I've not thought about the impact of anonymity
in quite this way before.]
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Yes this has all worked, it can be a pain to some people and there may
be complaining during the process but over all I have learned a great deal
since the first of this course.
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I don't think so, I don't really like the structure. It might work for
other people but not for me. [I'm sorry. I'm not sure there's much I
can do. It strikes me, though, that it really shouldn't be a question of
whether it "works for you," but whether you can help it to work. Lectures
and class discussions of poems don't work for some people (they didn't
work very well for me), but they can usually find a way of learning from
them.]
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Not overly, but I do understand what you are trying to do.
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Taking the focus off of grades, and putting it towards producing quality
work, and work that has meaning, and the potential to help the learning
of others-- instead of just producing work for a prof. It has been effective,
and continues to be my preferred way of learning and sharing.
6. This course has tried to help people attend to how literary forms
and literary history come to be seen by scholars and authorities, and how
ideas about them are constructed by people discussing and writing about
them -- and how we can find out about that sort of thing in the library
and on line. Has this affected the way you think about such matters? How?
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It has affected the way I think about these matters, in the aspect that
I did not know about the authors until now. It is interesting reading new
things.
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No. [I'm disappointed. I'd have thought that at least in some way it
would have affected this.]
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I enjoy this entire process and in fact is why I think I enjoy Literature
so much. I have always been a fan of going to the library to get information
and feeling like you know how to gain knowledge in a place many people
would feel lost in! I learned how to properly research a couple years ago
but this course has done nothing but help me get better at it and in fact
teach me general areas I have now memorized to go to for certian topics.
I can now find an entire section on eigthteenth century authors and walk
down the isle recognizing every name that I see!
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I have enjoyed doing the research for this class, because I have taken
other English courses where we just fly by important literary periods in
history. This class slows down that process and I am learning a lot more
about writers and the history of the eighteenth century. [This is one
of the alternatives I try to offer, and I'm happy to hear that it's helping
at least some people. There's lots to be said for the more usual way of
approaching literature, but I think it's narrow if that's all you encounter.]
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Yes it has affected how I think about these things, because although some
texts are considered as very black and white in their arguments, the widely
different takes and opinions scholars have some of them keep reminding
me that history, and in turn literature-- are not nearly as simple to interpret
as they first appear to be. Especially not when I began thinking about
history as a creatively organized set of potentially partially fictitious
(well, and sometimes constructed) rendition of the past. [I like this
way of putting it.]
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Not really, sorry. [I am, too.]
7. What do you think it's important for me to know about how this course
is working (or isn't) that the questions I've asked above didn't provide
for you to answer?
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I don't think there is anything? I enjoy this class the way it is already.
I'm very happy with it.
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Moodle is not working, perhaps if the assignments had more value, and less
moodling. [I think it's odd to categorize it as "Moodle." I suspect
what's not working for you isn't that particular software package, but
the basic structure of what I'm doing with it. In fact, I'm not very crazy
about Moodle -- but I suspect if I used other programs you wouldn't be
much happier with them.]
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I think that providing us with some of your input would be great, and lightening
the load on Sundays. [I think there's a place for my input, and
I try to put it there. I'll think about the workload issue. I wonder if
it would help to reiterate what I usually say: if you find yourself putting
more than eight hours a week into this class regularly, stop doing it.
And tell me about it.]
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I'm not sure I have anything of much help to offer, here. If I think of
something once I've pressed the "submit" button, I'll e-mail you.
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I enjoying being recorded on the assignments and effort I put in this class
because it is my strongest area that is never put in perspective in courses.
I find myself devoted to all my classes but sometimes just not smart enough
so this class gives you a chance to shine in both areas.
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