English 3336
Restoration and Eighteenth Century Poetry and Prose
responses to A Modest Proposal
The number of souls in this kingdom being usually reckoned
one million and a half, of these I calculate there may be about two hundred
thousand couple whose wives are breeders; from which number I subtract
thirty thousand couples who are able to maintain their own children, although
I apprehend there cannot be so many, under the present distresses of the
kingdom; but this being granted, there will remain an hundred and seventy
thousand breeders. I again subtract fifty thousand for those women who
miscarry, or whose children die by accident or disease within the year.
There only remains one hundred and twenty thousand children of poor parents
annually born. The question therefore is, how this number shall be reared
and provided for, which, as I have already said, under the present situation
of affairs, is utterly impossible by all the methods hitherto proposed.
For we can neither employ them in handicraft or agriculture; we neither
build houses (I mean in the country) nor cultivate land: they can very
seldom pick up a livelihood by stealing, till they arrive at six years
old, except where they are of towardly parts, although I confess they learn
the rudiments much earlier, during which time, they can however be properly
looked upon only as probationers, as I have been informed by a principal
gentleman in the county of Cavan, who protested to me that he never knew
above one or two instances under the age of six, even in a part of the
kingdom so renowned for the quickest proficiency in that art.
I am assured by our merchants, that a boy or a girl before twelve years
old is no salable commodity; and even when they come to this age they will
not yield above three pounds, or three pounds and half-a-crown at most
on the exchange; which cannot turn to account either to the parents or
kingdom, the charge of nutriment and rags having been at least four times
that value.
I shall now therefore humbly propose my own thoughts, which I hope will
not be liable to the least objection.
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I feel like I am repeating myself, but now you can tell that this is a
satire, especially since in the first paragraph he employs what appears
to be quantitative research to back up his proposal about eating children.
He makes it seem like they are animals, referring to them women as "breeders,"
and this deliberate dehumanization is again to say, "see what I'm doing?
I am making a mockery out of this serious situation to show you guys that
you in fact are being just as ridiculous." It becomes even more like a
business transaction when he states: "a boy or a girl before twelve years
old is no salable commodity." This just adds to the humor and overall foolishness
of the proposal. I say foolish because on the surface the proposal is just
that, but really this is an incredibly smart piece of work underneath.
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What Swift is doing in this section is presenting readers with numbers
and facts to persuade his argument/proposal. This exaggeration and the
way he has presented the information is almost convincing. I always find
that when numbers and facts are presented it can almost be legitimate.
The sentence, “I shall now therefore humbly purpose my own thoughts, which
I hope will not be liable to the least objection” is just before Swift
is going to propose his 'unarguable' solution to everyones economic issues.
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It seems here that Swift is showing how much children are burdening the
society; however, he is actually giving a number of how many children are
effected and showing the distribution of wealth. He points out how large
the lower class actually is.
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The reader at this point learns more of how this system works. How they
keep some children around to grow up and continue the circle of life. The
reader may begin to wonder, don't some mother's hide their children? Does
everyone agree with this, mother's included? Reader may think it's odd
how they say "only remains one hundred and twenty thousand children of
poor parents annually born." The reader may start to wonder, do they not
eat anything else? The reader may also wonder, what this community looks
like since they "can neither employ them in handicraft or agriculture;
we neither build houses (I mean in the country) nor cultivate land..."
A reader may find it odd how much it matters if the children can be beneficial,
like why aren't the adults working and building a community like we have?
The reader is being led to feel and think that this is so wrong on so many
levels and that it is disturbing. The reader at this point can only expect
to read of what the aut hor will now propose on their own thoughts.
This proposal is going to be disturbing too probably, since this whole
story so far has been disturbing, the reader cannot expect anything else.
Swift's choice of words here keeps the reader engaged enough to want to
know what his Modest Proposal is going to be. This story is so twisted,
it is hard to not wonder what is going to be proposed next. This part of
the story helps the reader understand more how this system works.
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By using math to demonstrate the amount of children born to poor parents,
it seems like his plan is so well thought out that the reader will be easily
convinced. Also, the math may help to confuse those who are less educated,
and will simply believe his proposal because Swift seems intelligent enough
to have found a math equation proving his point. Also, by defining
the usefulness of children under twelve only helps his point by demonstrating
that the children are useless even if they do work and earn little to no
money. So far, he has done very well in proving that the country would
be better off without these children as they are useless to their parents
and to the kingdom.
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When I read the first paragraph in this section, I find that Swift is writing
like someone would talk. He rambles on and on, rearing off topic, and almost
loses his train of thought entirely. To me, this adds to the sense of reality
in the piece. This makes it seem like someone might actually propose this
idea; of selling poor children to the rich. Here, I'm sensing
Swift's anger towards people proposing child labor as a solution to the
economic suffering of poor families. It's foolish and terrible to think
that someone would actually force a child, of any age, to work (even crazier
to propose to sell them for food). It shouldn't matter how poor a family
is, it should't matter how many poor families there are, it shouldn't matter
how old the child is, a child should not be responsible to provide for
their parents or anyone else. I got pretty wrapped up in this section,
Swift was pretty successful in showing me how ridiculous the beliefs of
some people are. I can just picture the "thousands of families" forcing
their babies to work while they sit at home and complain about being poor.
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I feel that this exercise would be much more beneficial if I had not read
the work already. Paying closer attention to his wording that in past readings
I notice the carefree way that he is suggesting selling of children. Also
he is constantly mentioning how children have no value to society.
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Again, some solid work by Swift here, selling his satire as serious stuff.
He provides numbers and a thoughful analysis of how many children out there
that cannot be taken care of. He also argues how other methods are ultimately
not useful since they can't provide adults with any good talents and their
going rate on the market is not very good. Again the tone of the
letter is serious and to the point, there is no indication that Swift is
being anything but frank in this essay, which of course is entirely the
point and to me indicates that Swift was a pretty talented writer.
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In this section, Swift takes the reader by the hand to lay his ground work
for the argument to come, and the idea of bringing "statistics" in, or
numbers, paired later with Ì have been informed by a principal gentleman,
and "I am assured by our merchants" and "humbly propose my own thoughts,
which I hope will not be liable to the least objection" -- aims to establish
this narrator as an authority of sorts on this. And if
I didn't already know what his argument was, I would be drawn into reading
on, and probably developing some hope for Ireland, because he's getting
his readers to think: "oh, this guys knows what he's talking about, and
sounds legitimate, and logic."
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Again, the poor children are spoken of as an object, or now moreso a commodity.
The use of the words "breeders" and pricing kids as a bad investment serves
to say that even though they're real people, the treatment usually afforded
begging children is the same as one would pay to a business transaction,
essentially de-humanizing them.
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The voice convinces the reader that there are no other ways to solve the
problem, and that all other voiced options are impossible. He/she
has set the reader up to believe that his proposal is the only option.
The reader is led to think that the voice has a great idea to solve all
problems of poverty and protect the children from starvation.
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